tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post9195089193245011958..comments2023-11-02T17:33:43.793+05:30Comments on Flickering Cursor, The: CreditsFlickering Cursorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10636603993059362692noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-73447044033455394672010-01-15T14:47:16.669+05:302010-01-15T14:47:16.669+05:30@Jane. Yeah i thought the twist was a bit too subt...@Jane. Yeah i thought the twist was a bit too subtle. but decided to leave it that way. was wanting to know if this made sense even as a straightforward timeline.Flickering Cursorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10636603993059362692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-72402217342059011272010-01-14T21:06:22.379+05:302010-01-14T21:06:22.379+05:30needed a second read too myself before i got it.
a...needed a second read too myself before i got it.<br />and got the Wow !Jandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17196460532320443618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-86499205955735052702009-11-09T08:29:22.622+05:302009-11-09T08:29:22.622+05:30Nice story...liked itNice story...liked itPoornimahttp://abhor-origins.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-73019896387947940002009-10-21T18:19:44.721+05:302009-10-21T18:19:44.721+05:30@QQ. Glad you liked it. Thanks for dropping by.@QQ. Glad you liked it. Thanks for dropping by.slash\\http://www.flickeringcursor.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-61672849019341760962009-10-21T16:05:49.181+05:302009-10-21T16:05:49.181+05:30Pointless or not, pulp fiction or not, it is still...Pointless or not, pulp fiction or not, it is still interesting reading. I holds your attention. Looking forward to more stuff from you.Rhishi Pethehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17841938819918942839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-3454033658029770662009-10-05T17:47:54.159+05:302009-10-05T17:47:54.159+05:30was wondering how to make this longer. i cheated o...was wondering how to make this longer. i cheated on the fall, it couldn't have been a minute anyways. plus the terrace scene couldn't be elongated too much so as sustain the initial thread of thought.slash\\http://www.flickeringcursor.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-48124544221716140382009-09-30T18:33:32.237+05:302009-09-30T18:33:32.237+05:30good story, i think it should have been little lon...good story, i think it should have been little longerAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03267278775247532112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-32262119741895538042009-09-25T17:01:00.459+05:302009-09-25T17:01:00.459+05:30@meg. thanks.
"read the whole story in new l...@meg. thanks. <br />"read the whole story in new light." is that a reference to my comment on your life spectrum post? ;)<br />btw, there's no suicide angle (atleast not an intended one). he carries the gun just in case his friend acts tough, but gets pushed off the building before he can use it. so the "gun" along with the beamer becomes a metaphor for "pointlessly-mundane".slash\\http://www.flickeringcursor.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-82224356483293932752009-09-25T16:28:34.668+05:302009-09-25T16:28:34.668+05:30now i do!
suddenly i read the whole story in a new...now i do!<br />suddenly i read the whole story in a new light.<br />you see i didn't quite get the suicide angle before,<br />then i thought<br />'oh wait why did it say one minute <br />to six'<br />and everything falls into place<br /><br />nicely done! ;)Meghana Naiduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11938703634449807919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-13743462989158417762009-09-25T11:56:24.364+05:302009-09-25T11:56:24.364+05:30@mentalie: yeah, you get the pointlessness in the ...@mentalie: yeah, you get the pointlessness in the end, when you realize the end itself is pointless.<br /><br />@AGG: menacing was not the objective, but it ended/started that way.<br /><br />though pulp fiction is the inspiration for the content, the reverse-chrono was obviously from memento. and a nod to..erm... johnny gaddar - where the opening scene is of the protagonist getting killed. we just don't know it that's all.slash\\http://www.flickeringcursor.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-2568617596785005052009-09-25T09:54:00.188+05:302009-09-25T09:54:00.188+05:30yeeeew. nice and menacing.
i liked the " i h...yeeeew. nice and menacing.<br /> i liked the " i have my finger over the business end now." super cool.agent green glasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07300665297563493646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-13434365597552500372009-09-25T02:27:57.918+05:302009-09-25T02:27:57.918+05:30my god, that's a dire ending. i'd hate to ...my god, that's a dire ending. i'd hate to get the pointlessness of it all at the end!mentaliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10389745690489521170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-48409430557149978022009-09-24T22:38:48.261+05:302009-09-24T22:38:48.261+05:30@Meg: Sorry, my bad. I meant safety catches (as in...@Meg: Sorry, my bad. I meant safety catches (as in guns). Made the changes now.Flickering Cursorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10636603993059362692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5865829648961928712.post-20462250669580360252009-09-24T20:52:48.672+05:302009-09-24T20:52:48.672+05:30ooo its all very 'pulp fiction'
should hav...ooo its all very 'pulp fiction'<br />should have been longer, definitely!<br /><br />BUT whats with the safety locks?<br />i dont think ive quite gotten what its all aboutMeghana Naiduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11938703634449807919noreply@blogger.com